Our class has been working on writing satisfying endings of narrative story writing.
This is an example of a BORING ending!
"So that is the end of the story about how I survived that avalanche."
This is an example of a satisfying ending!
"I was at the top of the Green Mountains. The ground seemed to be moving! I thought it was all my imagination. Tiny rocks started to pour down like a disastrous rainstorm.Now I knew that shaking ground was not my imagination. I ran down the steep rocky hills. Until humungous rocks fell down. I felt like they were chasing me like police dogs. I heard out in the distance avalanche!!! There were helicopters flying across the mountains making sure no one was on the mountains.They saw me....I got out of the disaster.I survived the avalanche!
written by : Rachel
typed by: Rachel and Sarah
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